1.结构不平行
例:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候,应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
2.不知所云
例:Many companies began using computers mouth.
3.段落过长,不分段,主语与动词一致问题
She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主语和动词在数方面不一致。
4.句子别扭
We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辞过长或不清。换言之,句子显得滑稽可笑。
5.不要使用缩写
在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can"t,don"t,it"s,we"ll,they"ve等等),而应当使用单词的完整形式(cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have等等)。
6.关联词语重复
Since I want to go to a good school,therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。